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It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Đề thi thật IELTS Writing task 2 ngày 8/5/2021
There is a widely-held view that the state budget should be allocated to encouraging a healthy way of living rather than paying for hospitalized citizens. I only agree with this idea up to a point.
On the one hand, there are good grounds to argue that government’s financial assistance for the already-ill patients is critical. The major reason is that this means of support enables patients, especially those who find medical costs beyond their financial capability, to receive treatment and recover. Costs incurred in the process of hospitalization can be staggeringly high in some countries and for serious diseases such as cancer or cardiovascular problems, thus imposing a financial burden on family members. With the state provision of monetary aids, ill but financially disadvantaged patients are guaranteed to be treated properly.
On the other hand, I contend that healthy lifestyle promotion programs should be prioritized, given their long-lasting impacts on public wellbeing. Many diseases nowadays are triggered by harmful habits, which can be effectively prevented by adopting a healthy lifestyle. For example, obesity is one of the most common health problems in developed countries and it is mostly caused by excessive consumption of fast food and a lack of physical exercise. If the public’s awareness of health hazards posed by unhealthy habits are raised, people can actively prevent such risks and consequently, not only are medical fees greatly reduced but the public health is also significantly improved.
In conclusion, while the government’s financial support is beneficial to a part of the society, I opine that the budget for healthy lifestyle promotion initiatives should be given priority , taking their long-term positive influences into account.
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