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Đề IELTS Writing task 1 ngày 29/05/2021

Đề IELTS Writing task 1 ngày 29/05/2021

Đề bài: The percentage of men and women aged 60 – 64 who were employed in 4 countries in 1970 and 2000. 

The bar chart provided compares the proportions of male and female employees whose ages ranged from 60 to 64 in four different countries over 30 years.

Overall, more males were employed than females in the given age range. The year 2010 witnessed declines in the number of both men and women employed in all four countries, with Belgian and American females being the worst hit.

In 1970, America was the country that had the highest employment rate of citizens aged 60-64, approximately 86% for males and 78% for females. Following this, Indonesia had nearly the same percentage of employed men at roughly 84% but a much lower proportion of women at 65%. Although Belgium and Japan had similar proportions for males at just over three quarters, fewer Japanese women were able to find employment at the age of over 60.

In 2000, the 60-64-year-olds in all nations suffered from a drop in job opportunities. While three out of four countries namely the USA, Japan, Indonesia recorded similar decreases of around 10% for males, the figures for their counterparts fell by 33%, 9% and 15% respectively. Employees who were 60-64 in Belgium were the worst affected, with the proportions decreasing by 27% for males and 55% for females.

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The bar chart provided compares the proportions of male and female employees whose ages ranged from 60 to 64 in four different countries over 30 years.

Overall, more males were employed than females in the given age range. The year 2010 witnessed declines in the number of both men and women employed in all four countries, with Belgian and American females being the worst hit.

In 1970, America was the country that had the highest employment rate of citizens aged 60-64, approximately 86% for males and 78% for females. Following this, Indonesia had nearly the same percentage of employed men at roughly 84% but a much lower proportion of women at 65%. Although Belgium and Japan had similar proportions for males at just over three quarters, fewer Japanese women were able to find employment at the age of over 60.

In 2000, the 60-64-year-olds in all nations suffered from a drop in job opportunities. While three out of four countries namely the USA, Japan, Indonesia recorded similar decreases of around 10% for males, the figures for their counterparts fell by 33%, 9% and 15% respectively. Employees who were 60-64 in Belgium were the worst affected, with the proportions decreasing by 27% for males and 55% for females.

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