Tham khảo chữa đề Writing IELTS task 2 ngày 21/11/2020

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IELTS Writing task 2

Ngày 21/11/2020

Đề bài: Government should make laws about people’s nutrition and food choice. Others argue that is their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

Bài mẫu tham khảo:

It is apparent that nutrition has a significant impact on humans’ health. Therefore, while some argue that people should have the right and individual responsibility to opt for their food, I am of the opinion that laws related to citizens’ nutrition and food selection should be enforced by national officials.

On the one hand, it is believed that taking daily food is a matter of personal choice Firstly, it is irrefutable that favourite taste is the main reason affecting which food a person chooses to consume. In addition, for food lovers, scrumptious eatables enable them to calm down and relieve stress, which may lead to their uncomfortable and squeezed feelings when being under control by food laws. Secondly, people now have access to various ways of keeping fit and healthy, thus raising their awareness of adopting a favourable lifestyle. Several typical examples would be taking detox drinks and doing yoga as well as regular exercise which assist people, especially junk food consumers, in body balance and weight loss. 

On the other hand, I am in favour of the idea that laws about food and nutrition should be applied for the following justifications. To begin with, this application can bring a wide range of long-term benefits for citizens’ health and extend their longevity. Undoubtedly, these rules and regulations will push people to choose nutritious and clean food so that a number of fatal diseases relating to diabetes and obesity can be avoided. Another main rationale is to reduce pressure and financial burden for national budget and economy. Apparently, less spending on nutritious problems and disease treatments will save a great deal of government’s money and energy that can be devoted to the development of other important sectors such as education and finance.

In conclusion, although citizens should have the freedom to choose a favourite food, it seems to me that national officials need to take timely steps with effective laws to boost people towards a healthier lifestyle.

Word count: 324

has a significant impact on: Có ảnh hưởng lớn đến

opt for: Lựa chọn

enforced: Ép buộc

national officials: Quan chức quốc gia

personal choice: Lựa chọn cá nhân

scrumptious: Ngon miệng

eatables: Đồ ăn

relieve stress: Giải tỏa stress

squeezed: Bóp nghẹt

being under control by: Chịu sự kiểm soát của

raising their awareness of: Nâng cao ý thức

assist: Giúp đỡ

body balance: Cân bằng cơ thể

weight loss: Giảm cân

long-term benefits: Lợi ích lâu dài

extend their longevity: Tăng tuổi thọ

fatal diseases: Bệnh hiểm nghèo

diabetes: Bệnh tiểu đường

obesity: Béo phì

reduce pressure and financial burden: Giảm thiểu áp lực và gánh nặng tài chính

national budget: ngân sách quốc gia

nutritious problems: Các vấn đề về dinh dưỡng

devoted: Cống hiến

timely steps: Các giải pháp kịp thời

boost: Thúc đẩy

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