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Chữa đề thi thật IELTS Writing task 2 ngày 13/3/2022

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​​Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?

đề thi thật IELTS Writing task 2 ngày 13/3/2022

Đề thi IELTS Writing task 2 ngày 13/3/2022

As the Internet has become an integral part of modern life, some people have chosen to store personal data, such as banking, contacts, and addresses online. While this tendency provides some benefits to online users, I would contend that its drawbacks are more significant.

On the one hand, retaining personal information online aids people in organizing data systematically and quickly tracking it with a click of the mouse. Because a normal Internet user normally owns a multitude of accounts on several banking websites and social media platforms, they can easily forget their usernames and passwords that are associated with their private data. With the help of professional online storage software which instantly saves passwords, credit card numbers, people are given access to any websites that they signed up or made transactions on without having to remember lengthy words or a series of numbers. Lastpass, for instance, is a software that automatically saves critical information of users such as banking information and helps people with filling in online forms automatically.

On the other hand, I would argue that the disadvantages of online storage far outweigh its benefits, as storing personal information online poses a major threat to people’s privacy. Online users may face unwanted attempts to access their data from hackers, even if they use passwords for all their logged-in devices and use passwords with every online account. By sending links and attachments and luring people to click on them, cybercriminals possess confidential information such as financial details, social insurance numbers and use this to make illegal purchases or commit other frauds. In addition, Internet users also may encounter data breaches. An illustration of this is the case of Facebook when the information of millions of users including their home addresses was leaked online in 2019.

To conclude, it is clear that online data storage is advantageous to people in managing a huge amount of information. However, I believe that its downsides, including the risk of identity theft and data leakage, should not be underestimated.

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