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IELTS Writing task 2

Ngày 28/11/2020

Đề bài: Government should make laws about people nutrition and food choice. Others argue that it is their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Bài mẫu tham khảo:

To have good health closely relies on the diet that each person pursues. While some people argue that there should be official laws and regulations modifying what people eat, I firmly believe in the freedom of food choices and nutrition intake for each individual.

It is undeniable that imposing regulations on food could considerably influence both individuals and society. Regulating the quality and quantity of nutrients each person takes to boost an individual’s health is worth complementing. Once a healthier population is secured, public health costs will decrease accordingly. To realize this idea, legislators could lessen the sales of unhealthy food by levying a higher tax on things containing harmful substances such as carbonated sugary drinks and fried fast food. This action could partially reduce the consumption of food products that are detrimental to health.

However, I perceive that this act of launching laws over people’s choices for food is not the most effective approach to encourage people to eat healthily. Firstly, it is not sure that the implementation of raising tax for food would lead to the desired outcome. A higher charge on tax can completely stop everyone from consuming unhealthy food if they are not well-equipped with the knowledge and awareness of the destruction that harmful substances may have on their body. Furthermore, these regulations arguably constitute a violation of some most basic human rights which is the freedom of choice. The governmental restraint of controlling what one can have and must not have in their meals may lead to unwanted protests and demonstrations. There are other measurements that authorities can resort to, especially those requiring personal education about the problems. Only when one is fully aware of a healthy diet, can they make a proper decision and stick to it for themselves.

In short, while it is true that rules and regulations from the government can take control of what people eat, I think that nutrient intake is a matter of personal choice and responsibility.

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