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IELTS Writing task 2 Ngày 21/12/2020

Đề bài: In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people encouraged to attend and learn more?

Bài mẫu tham khảo:

The notable absence of young adults in classical music concerts has become a topic of grave concern these days. While the discussion about the barriers preventing youngsters from enjoying an orchestra performance remains varied, people now also steer attention to the reason why those sophisticated music pieces should be listened to by the young generation.

There might be several reasons why art music is acquiring less and less young audiences. First, the situation may have its root from the common assumption that classical music is only for the old and elite. It is quite often that an orchestra would glue to a formal situation where the elderly immersed in their rich and solemn atmosphere dominate the scene. This thought makes chamber music appear outdated and uncool from the youngster’s perspective. Second, the devotion of time and money is not what all young people are willing to, let alone the fact that many are unable to, make. Admittedly, the purchase of expensive tickets and luxury outfits needed for a concert might be a burden to a fresh graduate or one who has just secured a job. Even when finance is not a problem, a classical composition requires lots of research and knowledge beforehand to understand the music. Therefore, it would hardly be the best choice for people at their young age of fast-paced life and easy entertainment.

However, it is worth encouraging the young generation to take time to learn about the beauty of chamber music. Once one knows about the timeless compositions of famous composers such as Mozart and Beethoven, they will feel blessed being in a world where such beautiful pieces of music shine. While popular songs now almost resemble one another in repeated beat and cliche lyrics about happiness and sadness in love, classical compositions bring about a whole new world of diverse emotions. In other words, a beautiful symphony with a smart arrangement would help to enrich the emotional experiences of the audience. Furthermore, science has proven that those who listen to classical music would not only feel healthier inside and out but also work more creatively and productively. Such beneficial effects are mentioned through researches that show how the soothing melody of classical music reduces the cortisol level in the human brain and eventually helps to release stress. Those melodies even gain listeners good sleep and sound mind as the frequency of classical music being likely to match the human brain wave. Hence, by healing and boosting their brainpower, classical music could help to enhance people’s well-being.

In short, the supposition of classical music being unfashionable along with its costly requirements are among those reasons why youngsters lack interest in listening to symphonies. However, they would gain much more for their soul and life once they learn to appreciate those wonderful musical works.

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