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IELTS Writing task 2 Ngày 16/01/2021

 

Đề bài: Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

Bài mẫu tham khảo:

Humans have not only deemed food as a fundamental need of their lives, but also shifted to a lifestyle which exists the requirements for a wide range of foods with attractive tastes. While some argue that students should give priority to core subjects, I am of the opinion that food-based majors and different ways of food preparation should be included in the educational curriculum.

On the one hand, it is believed that students should focus on important aspects instead of wasting time on food studying. To begin with, it is apparent that people now have a tendency to shorten the length of time spent on food preparation thanks to the appearance of various modern tools such as rice cookers, electric heaters, and microwave ovens. The cooking process has also gradually disappeared due to the continuous growth of fast food industries and restaurant chains. Furthermore, there are a variety of subjects including physics and chemistry which make a contribution to the future development of mankind. These aspects obviously take a great amount of time to do research with a view to achieving remarkable results.

On the other hand, I hold my firm belief that it is necessary for educational institutions to teach about the science of food and cooking. Firstly, it is undeniable that gaining a profound insight into cooking and nutrition would enable students to lead a healthier lifestyle. Undoubtedly, when having knowledge about each ingredient and making dishes, they will have ultimate control of what they are putting into their bodies, thus enhancing the health and well-being of themselves and probably people around. In addition, as modern people have been increasingly concerned about their diets, graduates from related majors may have more opportunities to pursue a decent job with an impressive salary. A typical job would be a nutritionist who assists people in bettering both mental and physical performance through education in food intakes and specially designed diets.

In conclusion, although it may seem sensible for students to concentrate only on fundamental subjects, I personally prefer the learning programs containing subjects related to food and cooking skills for the above-mentioned justifications.

Word count: 348

Vocabulary highlight

• fundamental need: nhu cầu thiết yếu
• give the priority to something: ưu tiên cái gì
• food-based subjects = subjects related to food: các môn học liên quan đến đồ ăn
• educational curriculum = learning programmes: chương trình học
• have tendency to V: có xu hướng làm gì
• shorten the length of time: rút ngắn khoảng thời gian
• cooking process: quá trình nấu nướng
• the continuous growth: sự phát triển không ngừng
• make contribution to something: tạo sự đóng góp cho cái gì
• achieve remarkable results: đạt được kết quả đáng ghi nhận
• educational institutions = schools
• gain a profound insight into: có cái nhìn sâu sắc về cái gì
• lead a healthy lifestyle: theo lối sống lành mạnh
• have ultimate control of: có sự kiểm soát toàn bộ về
• enhance health and well-being: nâng cao sức khoẻ
• be increasingly concerned about something: ngày càng quan tâm đến cái gì
• pursue a decent job: theo đuổi công việc tốt
• better (v): tăng, phát triển
• mental and physical performance: tình trạng về tinh thần và thể chất
• food intakes: lượng thức ăn nạp vào cơ thể
• specially designed diets: chế độ ăn được thiết kế đặc biệt
• sensible: hợp lý
• concentrate on something: tập trung vào cái gì

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