Chữa đề IELTS Writing task 2 ngày 13/3/2021

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Chữa đề IELTS Writing task 2 ngày 13/3/2021

Đề bài: More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Bài mẫu tham khảo:

Recent years have witnessed substantial advances in technology with the invention of the Internet as an epitome. An increasing number of Internet users have agreed to provide their personal information to online websites for different daily purposes. Despite the potential risks this tendency may pose, I still opine that the positive aspects are more considerable.

Invasion of privacy and cyberbullying, on the one hand, are deemed the two most major concerns when it comes to the digital age. For instance, one can be easily and constantly bothered by unwanted calls offering different goods and services since his telephone number is publicized, which not only disturbs the recipient’s daily activities but also causes unnecessary irritation, affecting work productivity. There are many other situations in which the credit card information of users has been illegally stolen, resulting in a huge amount of money lost. Another case in point is that many people, especially celebrities, can easily be bullied or harassed by hurtful or threatening comments and messages posted by anti-fans. If their home or company addresses can be found online with just a few clicks away, those people will even have to suffer from batteries in real life. 

Be that as it may, the fact that the availability of information online helps facilitate various life aspects should not be ignored. First, daily activities can be carried out with more convenience. A typical example worth mentioning is delivery service. It can be said that never have people been able to do shopping with such ease. Every purchasing activity can take place online, and buyers only have to provide their mobile number as well as address in order to get their items delivered at door. Governments have also been making use of information public on social media sites to spot and track reactionaries or dangerous criminals so that the safety of society can be ensured. Another example is that during the Covid-19 pandemic, those who evaded the quarantine protocol were all caught by authorities because they often updated their activities on Facebook. 

In conclusion, although a person may be bothered or bullied by sharing their personal details online, this trend still benefits each individual and the general public to a great extent as long as the Internet and media literacy is popularized.

• substantial advances in technology: tiến bộ to lớn trong công nghệ
• an epitome: ví dụ điển hình
• potential risks: nguy cơ tiềm tàng
• deem (formal, C1) = consider: cho rằng
• unwanted calls: cuộc gọi không mong muốn
• unnecessary irritation: sự bực dọc không cần thiết
• batteries: hành vi bạo lực
• purchasing activity: hoạt động mua bán
• with ease: một cách dễ dàng
• reactionaries: kẻ phản động
• evade the quarantine protocol: trốn tránh quy định cách ly
• media literacy: kiến thức truyền thông

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