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IELTS Writing task 2

Ngày 03/12/2020

Đề bài: Some people think that children should aim to do their best at what they are doing. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

 

Bài mẫu tham khảo:

Educating children has always been an issue that triggers conflicting opinions. While some people are convinced that kids should not be forced to try their utmost at whatever they do, I would argue that all-out efforts bring many long-term benefits.

There are some good arguments as to why children do not need to make determined attempts at what they are following. The first reason concerns mental development. It should be noted that children are experiencing the most impressionable years of their life, therefore if parents constantly ask them to expend tremendous efforts, they are very likely to suffer from stress. For example, in Vietnam, it is extremely common to hear many so-called “encouraging words” from parents that encourage their children to always try their best at their studies in order to compete with their peers. Students have become so obsessed with those words that many studies to the detriment of their health to satisfy their parents’ expectations. In addition, being constantly reminded of doing their best will create a psychological specter that they are not trying enough and are inferior to others. This, undoubtedly, seriously shatters a child’s confidence.

On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for children to have strong determination for some reasons, one of which is the sense of responsibility being fostered from a very young age. To be more specific, when children are aware of the fact that they have to follow what they are doing till the end, they will go to great lengths to finish what they have begun. During this process, not only will a child become more responsible but he or she is also able to come up with different strategies to tackle problems arising along the way. By repeating this activity many times, children will become more creative and flexible in problem-solving, a skill required in virtually all aspects of modern society. A second advantage worth mentioning is that a sufficient amount of stress will act as an impetus for children to become a better version of themselves. However, this requires collaborative efforts from parents, schools, and students themselves so as to turn stress into a positive stimulus.

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that children are more likely to attain success if they are determined rather than take a superficial approach towards everything.

• all-out efforts: sự cố gắng nỗ lực hết mình
• impressionable years: những năm tháng nhạy cảm, dễ bị ảnh hưởng
• a psychological specter: bóng ma tâm lý
• To be inferior to somebody: kém cỏi so với ai đó
• To shatters somebody’s confidence: phá hủy sự tự tin của ai
• To foster a sense of responsibility: nuôi dưỡng tính trách nhiệm
• To go to great lengths to do something: cố gắng hết sức để làm gì
• To act as an impetus for something/to do something: đóng vai trò như sự thúc đẩy cho cái gì
• To take a superficial approach towards something: làm cái gì đó một cách hời hợt

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